It Ends Tonight (4)

21 Apr

Happy Weekend to you all. This is the concluding part of this series. I know you are thinking he said the same thing last time. I am serious this time around. It is the concluding part. Thank you for your patience. I just had to conclude it today as I am sure some of you will kill if I don’t. Enjoy!

Mr Adedoja is cursing at Frank who is still shocked to his marrow. He is standing about 20 feet from the man who has put him through pain. He could feel anger boiling in him and a storm of rage building up.
“Hey Mister, I am talking to you. Are you blind?” Mr Adedoja queries.
Suddenly, Frank charges forward, pushes Mr Adedoja to the ground, sits on his stomach and starts to punch him in the stomach and his face. Mr Adedoja swings his arms feebly like a woman as he tries to defend himself and Frank continues to pummel his face. The punches feel like a huge sack of stones thrown at his stomach and his face. He could only think of the number of broken ribs he is sure he is going to have as he had no strength to even shout out for help.
Dr Adedoja looks back and sees the scene and screams for help from the police. Four Policemen run out and they grab Frank off the body of Mr Adedoja.
Dr. Adedoja who had followed the policemen as they ran out kneels by the body of her husband. His face is swollen and in blood,she screams at Frank who the police have pushed to the ground and put handcuffs on.
“What has he done to you?” Dr Adedoja asks through her tears.
” He has done a lot.” Frank mutters through clenched teeth.

Mr Adedoja tries to speak, but his wife asks him not to. An ambulance arrives and the paramedics put Mr Adedoja on a stretcher and put him in the ambulance.
“Madam, your pikin still dey here” an officer says to Dr. Adedoja.
” Dem bring am here with him other friends for attempted arson” the officer continues.
” You no go bail am?” another officer asks her.
Frank could see the confusion on her face as she could not decide who to attend to first. Her husband or her child. The officers walk Frank into the station as Dr. Adedoja asks an officer to please take her the hospital.


Frank having spent the last 10 days in police custody could not help but wonder how many days he has left to spend in police custody. The past 10 days have been gruesome, the mosquitoes in the 6 by 6 cell had feast endlessly on his body,the offensive odour of ammonia from other cells and his,the cold floor he has been sleeping on all seem like it worth it, as he is sure Mr Adedoja must have a broken nose, couple of broken ribs and a difficult time chewing food.
Mr Adedoja is in pains but still alive at least for now.
An officer comes to open the cell and places handcuffs on Frank as he ushers him out of the cell in the same boxers he has had on for the last 10 days. The officer opens the door to an interrogation room and as Frank walks in, he sees Mr and Dr. Adedoja sitting.
Mr Adedoja has a plaster on his nose and his lips have stitches on them. Frank smiles as he sees this. He feels contented but not satisfied. The officer cuffs his hands behind the chair as he tells the couple they have just 15 minutes to spend. They nod in agreement as he leaves the room.
“Good Morning Mr Ehinomen” Dr. Adedoja says.
“Drop the formality outside and call me Frank” he replies with his eyes stone cold.
“Ok. How have you been?” she adds.
” Why not cut to the chase and tell me why you are  here” Frank says to the couple impatiently.
“Why did you attack me?” Mr Adedoja asks.
Frank laughs hysterically before replying ” are you serious?”
” Yes I am” Mr Adedoja replies.
“Do you remember your late surbodinate, Miss Bankole?” Franks asks Mr Adedoja.
” Yes I do. I remember Bimbo” he replies
” She was my fiancée and you were having an affair with her before she died”
“Oh my God!” Dr. Adedoja exclaims.
Mr Adedoja is shell shocked at Franks’s revelation but goes to defend himself ” I was not having an affair with her”
“What were you then doing with her?” Frank shouts in anger.
The shout attracts the officer outside and he walks into the room asking them to calm down or he will take Frank back.
“I was not doing anything with her” Mr Adedoja says in with his voice as firm as it could be.
Frank tries to wriggle free from the chair but he cannot. He just wants to strangle him.
” You cannot even admit that you were having an affair with her is that how much you do not respect her memory?” Frank says has his voice goes up 10 decibels. The officer comes back in to take Frank back as it had become obvious they could not keep their calm. He tries to uncuff Frank from the chair who is shouting and making threats at Mr Adedoja.
Mr Adedoja who refuses to be intimidated  starts shouting back at Frank, claiming his threats are empty and he will make sure he rots in jail.
” I am going to kill you” Frank says just as the officer cuffs him and is about taking him back.
Mr Adedoja screams back at him ” Let’s see how you will do that when I let you in rot in jail”
The officer is about to open the door when Dr. Adedoja stops him.
“Madam, wetin?” the officer asks.
” I just have to say something before you take him back” she says.
This gets both Frank and her husband’s attention. They are eager to find out what she has to say.
” Frank,your fiancée Bimbo………”
“Yes, what about her” Frank cuts in.
” She was my lover”.



Posted by on April 21, 2012 in Series


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31 responses to “It Ends Tonight (4)

  1. missodun

    May 11, 2012 at 3:17 pm

    Best ending ever!

  2. Layi

    April 23, 2012 at 11:19 am

    Nice bro….ur future is bright

  3. @jmoks

    April 22, 2012 at 10:47 am

    Choi! *drops agbalumo in shock* Nice one o!

    • hardehyi

      May 7, 2012 at 1:13 pm

      my friend will u pick up dat agbalumo n stop drooling

  4. fadeke

    April 21, 2012 at 8:05 pm

    Hardeyi has ‘keed’ me oo..wat a way to end d story.
    Nice one.

    • hardehyi

      May 7, 2012 at 1:13 pm

      LOL……Thanks Ma’am

  5. @iamadetona

    April 21, 2012 at 5:53 pm

    This is brilliant though. You the man bro!

  6. @missroyal05

    April 21, 2012 at 5:17 pm

    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!ds is so crazy,wat a revelation!!!!nice nice nice!

  7. orifunke

    April 21, 2012 at 4:25 pm

    *opens teeth* Interesting! And worth reading. Weldone!

    • hardehyi

      May 7, 2012 at 1:14 pm

      close ur teeth…….Thanks Ma’am!

  8. swagzBimpe

    April 21, 2012 at 1:28 pm

    Loool…… Nice one

  9. dboss

    April 21, 2012 at 12:56 pm

    Hahahahaha… Nice ending tho!! Wow!!!!

  10. teekellz

    April 21, 2012 at 12:06 pm

    Weyrey ni Bobo Yii sha!!!! Ahn ahn!!! *Clapping continuously* nice one bruv

    • hardehyi

      April 21, 2012 at 12:13 pm

      Na u be ma mentor nau!!!!!! LOL

  11. MafabaAlaso

    April 21, 2012 at 11:52 am

    Baba, na so craze dey start o! Nd if u end dis story like this ehn….. Anyway, #GodIsWatchingYou

    • hardehyi

      April 21, 2012 at 12:10 pm

      Lmao!!!!! #GodIsWatchingYouToo

  12. Dammy

    April 21, 2012 at 11:45 am


  13. bisi

    April 21, 2012 at 11:14 am

    Nyc way 2 end a story lyk dz

  14. Foluke

    April 21, 2012 at 10:51 am


    • hardehyi

      April 21, 2012 at 10:57 am


  15. udumark

    April 21, 2012 at 10:42 am

    Damn!!! Tolu, u’ve officially lost it!
    Perfect way to end if u ask me…mad climax!

    • hardehyi

      April 21, 2012 at 11:02 am

      LOL!!!!! Tanx Bruv!!!!!!

  16. debbie

    April 21, 2012 at 10:07 am


  17. mizztosin

    April 21, 2012 at 10:00 am

    O_O X1,000,000

  18. nneka rita

    April 21, 2012 at 9:52 am

    WTH!!!!!oh ok,der must be a sequel!!!!#bbm crying smiley#

  19. philipirabor

    April 21, 2012 at 9:45 am

    Okay, now †нα†’s not the ending I was expecting but omigush…dat was some striking revelation


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